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Il est bien ton texte mais juste il faudrait que tu réctifie quelques fautes d'ortographes si c'est au propre comme:
- known = know
- wait= waiting
-says= say (réctifie tes petites faute de pluriels parce que c'est peut être un détail mais ça fait perdre des points y'en a plusieurs )
- known = know
- wait= waiting
-says= say (réctifie tes petites faute de pluriels parce que c'est peut être un détail mais ça fait perdre des points y'en a plusieurs )
It's Monday afternoon, Elisa is waiting for Ariadne in a restaurant.
"Hello why are you so late? "says Elisa
"Hello sorry I was stuck in a traffic jam " explains Ariadne .
"I have been waiting for 30 minutes" answers Elisa angry.
"Yes I know, I'm sorry "says Ariadne .
"Where are you coming from ?" asks Elisa .
"I just come from my office" answers Ariadne .
"Okay! Look at me ! Since I telecommuted I 'm never late, because I can make my own schedule "argues Elisa .
" Yes but I work in an office and I cannot make my own schedule" answers Ariadne disappointed.
"But why didn't you work from home like me?" Asks Elisa
"Because I have young children's and it will be impossible for me to work at home with them "answers Ariadne.
"My children's are at home too and still I work at home. It's not a problem for me " explains Elisa .
" I prefer to have my family life and my job life appart; it's easier to handle for me. Moreover, I have colleagues at work who are friends I can speak with, argues Ariadne .
"Yes I do have colleagues too . The only difference is that we don't work in the same office as our boss and so we are not stressed " explains Elisa.
"I understand. I confess that my boss stressed me every now and then but it is not a big concern thanks to my colleagues's help " says Ariadne .
" We both have opposite opinions but I think that telecommuting has many advantages. For example you are always at home and you can take care of your family " answers Elisa happy.
"Yes, sometimes working far away from one's family is difficult but I have no choice so far " says Ariadne sadly.
"I have a proposition for you. My boss searches a new employee. Maybe would you like to try telecommuting ?", asks Elisa.
"Yes good idea ! Can I have your boss 's number, please ?" ,answers Ariadne looking happy.
"Yes with pleasure !", argues Elisa.
"Thanks Elisa. Bye and see you soon " replies Ariadne
"Bye Ariadne and good luck !", answers Elisa with a big smile.
"Hello why are you so late? "says Elisa
"Hello sorry I was stuck in a traffic jam " explains Ariadne .
"I have been waiting for 30 minutes" answers Elisa angry.
"Yes I know, I'm sorry "says Ariadne .
"Where are you coming from ?" asks Elisa .
"I just come from my office" answers Ariadne .
"Okay! Look at me ! Since I telecommuted I 'm never late, because I can make my own schedule "argues Elisa .
" Yes but I work in an office and I cannot make my own schedule" answers Ariadne disappointed.
"But why didn't you work from home like me?" Asks Elisa
"Because I have young children's and it will be impossible for me to work at home with them "answers Ariadne.
"My children's are at home too and still I work at home. It's not a problem for me " explains Elisa .
" I prefer to have my family life and my job life appart; it's easier to handle for me. Moreover, I have colleagues at work who are friends I can speak with, argues Ariadne .
"Yes I do have colleagues too . The only difference is that we don't work in the same office as our boss and so we are not stressed " explains Elisa.
"I understand. I confess that my boss stressed me every now and then but it is not a big concern thanks to my colleagues's help " says Ariadne .
" We both have opposite opinions but I think that telecommuting has many advantages. For example you are always at home and you can take care of your family " answers Elisa happy.
"Yes, sometimes working far away from one's family is difficult but I have no choice so far " says Ariadne sadly.
"I have a proposition for you. My boss searches a new employee. Maybe would you like to try telecommuting ?", asks Elisa.
"Yes good idea ! Can I have your boss 's number, please ?" ,answers Ariadne looking happy.
"Yes with pleasure !", argues Elisa.
"Thanks Elisa. Bye and see you soon " replies Ariadne
"Bye Ariadne and good luck !", answers Elisa with a big smile.