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Salut !
alors voilà je t'ai corrigé quelques fautes que j'ai remarqué, puis j'ai mis entre parenthèses les phrases qui à première vue n'avaient pas trop de sens pour moi .
her IDENTITY :
Her name is Youssra and her fistname
is DOUAR.
She was born on June 12th,
2006.
She is seven and a half years old.
She's got one big sister and a one
big brother.
She has got a one cat, her name is
Caramel.
She lives at 24 street of 8 may 1945,
in Echirolles.
Description physical :
Youssra is tall and slim.
She's got medium brown curly hair.
She has got a thin face.
Youssra has got a little nose.
Her eyes are brown.
She hasn't glasses but she likes
glasses.
her personality :
She is usually cherful but she is
rarely grumpy.
She is not very touchy and she has got
one speciale friend.
She mostly wears bright colors but
(she's never sit play alone. )
(Youssra sometimes do your best and she
never get into trouble).
Youssra, at home :
She seldom tidies room.
She often sets the table.
She never clears the table.
She never washing-up.
She always takes the dustbin out.
She sometimes carrys the shopping bags.
She seldom helps to cook dinner.
She always completes all her homework.
She always takes of her cat.
alors voilà je t'ai corrigé quelques fautes que j'ai remarqué, puis j'ai mis entre parenthèses les phrases qui à première vue n'avaient pas trop de sens pour moi .
her IDENTITY :
Her name is Youssra and her fistname
is DOUAR.
She was born on June 12th,
2006.
She is seven and a half years old.
She's got one big sister and a one
big brother.
She has got a one cat, her name is
Caramel.
She lives at 24 street of 8 may 1945,
in Echirolles.
Description physical :
Youssra is tall and slim.
She's got medium brown curly hair.
She has got a thin face.
Youssra has got a little nose.
Her eyes are brown.
She hasn't glasses but she likes
glasses.
her personality :
She is usually cherful but she is
rarely grumpy.
She is not very touchy and she has got
one speciale friend.
She mostly wears bright colors but
(she's never sit play alone. )
(Youssra sometimes do your best and she
never get into trouble).
Youssra, at home :
She seldom tidies room.
She often sets the table.
She never clears the table.
She never washing-up.
She always takes the dustbin out.
She sometimes carrys the shopping bags.
She seldom helps to cook dinner.
She always completes all her homework.
She always takes of her cat.
Je trouve que c'est un bon travail pour débuter aprées j'ai pas verifier les faute eet tout mais bon travail continue comme sa si ta besoin passe en pv bisou !